Comments on: Chicken Dance http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/ And other stories Sun, 11 Jul 2010 23:05:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Brinda http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-876 Brinda Sat, 26 Jun 2010 14:20:52 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-876 The quiet unassuming and elegant voice still conveys so much and evokes that breathless 'what will happen next' anticipation. I loved this. The quiet unassuming and elegant voice still conveys so much and evokes that breathless ‘what will happen next’ anticipation. I loved this.

]]> By: CJ http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-207 CJ Wed, 20 Jan 2010 22:21:57 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-207 This is exceptional. Really, I thoroughly enjoyed it. This is exceptional. Really, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

]]> By: Chance http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-201 Chance Tue, 19 Jan 2010 08:54:54 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-201 Very smooth narrative, also has a nice voyeuristic feel to it good stuff Very smooth narrative, also has a nice voyeuristic feel to it

good stuff

]]> By: Teresa http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-198 Teresa Mon, 18 Jan 2010 21:46:52 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-198 This is a beautiful and whole story, I absoloutely loved it from start to finish. You feel so much for the character and the cultural references blend rather than jar with the rest of the narrative. Stunning. This is a beautiful and whole story, I absoloutely loved it from start to finish. You feel so much for the character and the cultural references blend rather than jar with the rest of the narrative. Stunning.

]]> By: Linda http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-196 Linda Sat, 16 Jan 2010 22:39:19 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-196 I love your writing. Fluid, lyrical, mesmerizing. I read this story early this morning, then interrupted by children, but thought about it all day long. Finally a chance to say thank you for such a gift. Peace, Linda I love your writing. Fluid, lyrical, mesmerizing. I read this story early this morning, then interrupted by children, but thought about it all day long. Finally a chance to say thank you for such a gift. Peace, Linda

]]> By: mazzz_in_Leeds http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-195 mazzz_in_Leeds Sat, 16 Jan 2010 13:08:21 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-195 Masterful how you added in *that* game - hand of god indeed. Beautiful prose, as we have come to expect of you now! Masterful how you added in *that* game – hand of god indeed.
Beautiful prose, as we have come to expect of you now!

]]> By: DJ Kirkby http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-194 DJ Kirkby Sat, 16 Jan 2010 10:57:09 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-194 Your writing is beautiful. I have to remind myself to breath when I read your stories. Your writing is beautiful. I have to remind myself to breath when I read your stories.

]]> By: Christian Bell http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-193 Christian Bell Sat, 16 Jan 2010 03:33:40 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-193 There is an excellent pacing and narrative voice here, weaving details of the narrator's life and figures from history. Working in the "Hand of God" game was a masterful stroke to this story. It's all done seemingly effortlessly. Great job. There is an excellent pacing and narrative voice here, weaving details of the narrator’s life and figures from history. Working in the “Hand of God” game was a masterful stroke to this story. It’s all done seemingly effortlessly. Great job.

]]> By: shannon esposito http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-192 shannon esposito Sat, 16 Jan 2010 02:17:08 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-192 Oh, wonderful! "The chicken dance kept the world at bay, filled spaces, composed order!" We all need the chicken dance. This made me very happy for some reason, even with so much pain. And "she clears the space for her seedlings" I can just imagine the all consuming love and forgiveness of this woman. We should all have someone like this in our lives. Loved this. Oh, wonderful! “The chicken dance kept the world at bay, filled spaces, composed order!” We all need the chicken dance. This made me very happy for some reason, even with so much pain. And “she clears the space for her seedlings” I can just imagine the all consuming love and forgiveness of this woman. We should all have someone like this in our lives. Loved this.

]]> By: Laura Eno http://www.skycycler.com/2010/01/chicken-dance/comment-page-1/#comment-191 Laura Eno Sat, 16 Jan 2010 01:11:47 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=110#comment-191 Emotional, well-paced, homespun style. Wonderful piece, full of life. Emotional, well-paced, homespun style. Wonderful piece, full of life.

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