Comments on: Aurora Borealis

By: Eric J. Krause

Eric J. Krause — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 17:40:21 +0000

Excellent descriptions throughout. I enjoyed reading this one.

By: GP Ching

GP Ching — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 02:06:00 +0000

A story well told! I enjoyed the dichotomy between the the science fiction elements and the romantic elements.

By: Laura Eno

Laura Eno — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 00:54:04 +0000

How did I miss this last week? The connectivity of the three places was great, the bridge that opened between them leaving a shoe in one, a bare foot in another and a numb foot in a third!

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Tue, 26 Jan 2010 12:03:53 +0000

Burlington socks, I remember them!

“He came from a distinguished line of poets.” great line, and the Aurora description was excellent

By: ~Tim

~Tim — Mon, 25 Jan 2010 00:56:03 +0000

Very nice weaving together of disparate elements. And it’s sweet.

By: Amy

Amy — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 12:27:13 +0000

Brilliant, as always! I, too, love the shoe.

Well done!

By: shannon esposito

shannon esposito — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 03:25:57 +0000

Wonderful piece! Your tech skills as a writer are way over my head, but the message is loud and clear. Did we really bomb the Tower of Babel? I need to get out more Nice one!

By: Lou Freshwater

Lou Freshwater — Sat, 23 Jan 2010 13:41:05 +0000

This made me think of Calvino’s “Cosmicomics” for some reason. Probably because it is wonderful.

My favorite line:

“He came from a distinguished line of poets.”

Excellent.

By: Laurita

Laurita — Fri, 22 Jan 2010 19:55:31 +0000

So much to enjoy about this piece, I can’t possibly pick a favourite part. Beautifully written, as I’ve come to expect.

By: CJ

CJ — Fri, 22 Jan 2010 19:33:52 +0000

Quite lovely – I love the technical along with the mundane (the shoe – LOVE the shoe!), set against the romantic.
It must have been difficult to write, but you pulled it off seamlessly. Thank you!!