Comments on: Strawberry Stained Teeth http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/ And other stories Sun, 11 Jul 2010 23:05:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Deb http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-58 Deb Sun, 06 Dec 2009 14:03:55 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-58 What a wonderfully delicious story! It's strawberry fields forever :) What a wonderfully delicious story! It’s strawberry fields forever :)

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-57 David G Shrock Sat, 05 Dec 2009 23:25:39 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-57 Nice tale, a familiar experience for many children growing up. Confused by the first line. I don't see the connection with wars. 'PYO' Is that what the signs say there? Here they say, 'U-Pick.' Nice tale, a familiar experience for many children growing up. Confused by the first line. I don’t see the connection with wars.

‘PYO’ Is that what the signs say there? Here they say, ‘U-Pick.’

]]> By: Louise Dragon http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-56 Louise Dragon Sat, 05 Dec 2009 15:02:33 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-56 Reminded me of my father who encouraged us to eat all we could -- he knew we didn't get weighed! This was one of our favorite family outings described beautifully. Reminded me of my father who encouraged us to eat all we could — he knew we didn’t get weighed! This was one of our favorite family outings described beautifully.

]]> By: Cascade Lily http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-55 Cascade Lily Sat, 05 Dec 2009 11:41:04 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-55 Yep, I was there in the 70s too. In my skivvies and flares :) Felt sad and nostalgic reading this piece, as I knew the brother had been killed years later. Precious memories in this story. Well done at getting that emotional response :) Yep, I was there in the 70s too. In my skivvies and flares :)

Felt sad and nostalgic reading this piece, as I knew the brother had been killed years later. Precious memories in this story.

Well done at getting that emotional response :)

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-54 J. M. Strother Sat, 05 Dec 2009 01:22:05 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-54 Very nice piece. The imagery really comes to life. ~jon Very nice piece. The imagery really comes to life.
~jon

]]> By: Dana http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-53 Dana Fri, 04 Dec 2009 21:57:17 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-53 Really, really nice. It makes such a simple day seem so monumentally important. Really, really nice. It makes such a simple day seem so monumentally important.

]]> By: J. Dane Tyler http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-52 J. Dane Tyler Fri, 04 Dec 2009 21:24:11 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-52 Great piece. Love the nostalgic tone, and yes, I know that 70s Technicolor light very well indeed. Great job recalling it. Great piece. Love the nostalgic tone, and yes, I know that 70s Technicolor light very well indeed. Great job recalling it.

]]> By: Deanna Schrayer http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-51 Deanna Schrayer Fri, 04 Dec 2009 20:01:57 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-51 Beautiful word-weaving, and I'm especially fond because strawberries are my absolute favorite food on earth! I was the one that had to be weighed on the way out. :) Great story! Beautiful word-weaving, and I’m especially fond because strawberries are my absolute favorite food on earth! I was the one that had to be weighed on the way out. :)
Great story!

]]> By: ganymeder http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-50 ganymeder Fri, 04 Dec 2009 18:16:15 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-50 I really liked this. I wasn't quite sure how the first line tied into the ending though, unless the brother is missing from a war? I loved how descriptive this was. Thanks! I really liked this. I wasn’t quite sure how the first line tied into the ending though, unless the brother is missing from a war? I loved how descriptive this was. Thanks!

]]> By: uberVU - social comments http://www.skycycler.com/2009/12/strawberry-stained-teeth/comment-page-1/#comment-49 uberVU - social comments Fri, 04 Dec 2009 18:07:48 +0000 http://www.skycycler.com/?p=92#comment-49 <strong>Social comments and analytics for this post...</strong> This post was mentioned on Twitter by skycycler: Just posted: #fridayflash "Strawberry Stained Teeth" Back then, wars were far away: http://bit.ly/8u03J4... Social comments and analytics for this post…

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